June’s (2020)’s Prompts
- Each story’s first and last words had to begin with J.
- Each story had to include a game being played.
- Each story had to include the phrase MISS/MISSED THE BOAT.
Psychic Boy Incorporated
“Jose can give you the answers you need with his fourteen years of mediumship and tarot reading experience. Contact him today for $3.99 a minute or $12 for a video message and let him heal your broken heart!” Rudy read on an interactive app related to psychics.
It was a graveyard of what he felt was full of descriptions of promises, false hopes, and empty platitudes of strangers having the capacity to positively change your life and help your predicament. He always told himself he would never get suckered into the scams of psychics and would never get into a position of his life to stoop so low.
However, there seemed to be an undeniable pull for him to invest and seek help from the divine – or at least those that say that have that power. He had been pondering about using the services of psychics for a few days after his relationship breakdown, hoping he would get a definitive answer if his ex-partner had truly loved him. Hesitation ruled him in the first days, where he came to the conclusion that a complete stranger wouldn’t be able to be of any help or would understand the nuances of his ailments – especially not within a 250 word limit for the video messages. He also didn’t like the idea of spending an exorbitant amount of money on an expensive phone call. He was grieving over the loss of a relationship, he certainly didn’t want to be grieving over monetary loss either.
Yet the ache in his heart and his conscience overwhelmed him as he reminisced about his failed relationship. There was no closure. Just an abrupt, indirect goodbye that still pained him for months. Were they his soulmate or twin flame? Were they going to get back together again? Did he miss the boat on repairing the best relationship he ever had?
“Perhaps I should just try it once,” he thought, eventually submitting his credit card details over the online form and ordering a video conference with Jose – one that promised using the divine tools to help mediate any problem for their client.
“Jose, I feel like I’ve lost the best thing that’s ever happened to me and I haven’t been able to move on. Honestly, there’s not much I look forward to in my life right now. My work contract is ending, the whole world is a mess being locked in and my friends barely talk since they are moving on with their lives. The only thing I was looking forward to was seeing this person that meant the most to me. But they broke up with me. What do I do?” he typed in the message box
Rudy sighed. He wrote from the heart.
“Thank you for your question. Your true love is coming in the near future. His name begins with the letter J. We hope you enjoyed playing Psychic Boy Incorporated. Take 20% off your next order. Offer ends in June!”
Brief Reflective Commentary
Psychics have always been an interest of mine. The power of knowing the unknown, tapping into the divine and perhaps providing either therapy through a genuine and earnest want to care, or through devious methods of scamming people from there money. The story itself is pretty self-explanatory – although added with “real life” things (I’ll let you figure what those are – my friends know the inside joke with one of the references I’ve made).
Although I’ve done it for a while, I think this was a return to the sort of mundane but comically absurd kind of stories I write with that little bit of pathos which I seem to love and resonate with. There’s a bit of tongue in cheek humour as well that competitions like Furious Fiction know all too well!
I was a little sick and tired of writing woe as me stories (yes we get it, you’re heartbroken). But I still feel like I’m mining down that well a bit too much – so I thought why not poke some fun into it instead rather than feeling that little extra sad about things you can’t control. Self-deprecating at it’s… kind of finest.
C.